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Ok, so that is opposed to adult babble? And what does that mean, adult, and who even wants to know what that means; ever! Well the first sign of a ...

Bukowski is great. He speaks the truth and people don't like that too much!

I'd have to agree with the first review. I like this and I don't even know why, and I like that it made me like that! I also agree that ...

"This worked against his favor," -- I'd reword this, seemed awkward. "In his right hand, was a small glass of scotch stained" -- Don't think the comma is necessary there. ...

Yeah, these usually make me say, "Ahh, what the hell is wrong with this person." But the first couple of lines caught my eye. I think this reads more like ...

So is the Twilight series worth reading?

I hate to criticize anything of yours because your Vonnegut quote is frigin awesome, but I'd have to agree with the critique above. This is not a poem. This is ...

I liked this a lot. Four lines, four ideas about one thing (yellow) that I could've never of thought of, and for that I'm fond of this. It rhymes and ...

Nice job on the insect shot!

Yeah I'd have to agree with Cade. The face looks as if the Joker joined forces with Batman and they just fought their first crime together, or The Joker got ...

I liked this. It was short, cool, and to the point. This line kinda bothered me though, b/c I felt it could've been better within the context of the whole ...

Nice poem. I especially liked the ending, it was by far the strongest part of the piece. I'd have to agree about the rhyming, but to be honest if I ...

"I was to marry him and bare his children and take care of his house." -- I'd take the first and out, and replace it with a comma, so it ...

The Origin of Species by Charles Darwin

This was a really nice read, makes me wish I was that person worthy enough to deserve that poem in his/her's honor! Only the last line bothered me: "I really ...